Thursday, May 23, 2013

Preparation for Essay 2 - Comparison of Sources


Dillon Waugh

Hayes

English 100 – 9:10

2/11/13

Word Count:

Comparison Chart

 
Column
#1
 
Column
#2
Column
#3
 
Topic
Gap years are worth taking for the accomplishment and taste of life experience they allow takers.
Gap years are worth taking as they allow students time to be people, and to deny the worth in that is dehumanizing.
Gap years are worth taking as they allow students time to pursue interests and escape pressures to better their psychological health.
 
Effective
#1’s “Crown”
Flexible view of gap year – it needn’t be a year outside of education at all.
 
 
 
Ineffective
#2 and 3’s Failings
 
A bit of one long counterargument.
Largely anecdotal evidence and testimonial with little explanation, structure, or commentary.
 
#1 and #2’s Strengths
One needn’t keep their education out of mind on their gap year – not addressing but possibly appeasing skeptics.
Moore is the only of the three columnists to plainly address the counterargument.
 
 
Feature of #3
 
 
Barely seems to pose an argument rather than presenting interviews.

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