Thursday, May 23, 2013

Preparation for Essay 3 - Occupy - Inquiry Proofreading Draft


Dillon Waugh

Hayes

English 100 – 9:10

4/9/13

Word Count: 1,295

Occupy Inquiry Proofread Draft

The Occupy movement that began in New York and spread across America and beyond, inspiring similar socioeconomic protests in Russia and Australia among others, had passed its first anniversary as of September 2012 with question on what that year of fame and infamy was all for. While it began with clarion cries to the government to close the wealth gap and curse the rich for clinging to their money, there is general agreement that the legacy of the Occupy movement is not in any legislature that it called for. (Must verify this -  what legislature is claimed as inspired by the movement, and what was its motivation?) This leaves its remaining sympathizers to circle at the edges of its remnants as it continues to barely coast as what it was originally, burning out like an asteroid; they either look on ahead and all around at the burning fringes of its wake to analyze why its demands are not and have not been meant, or back along its wake for traces of what its legacy is, and how long they will last.

The first of the groups are generally in agreement: the Occupy movement’s insistent questions and requests were never directly answered because they were often incomprehensible; as the movement gained size, it lost its focus. Meghan Barr in the Northwest Herald interviews an early Occupy official who regretted that many of the movement’s observers joined for excuse to “talk about every social ill we have”, obscuring the movement’s original core intention, and Joe Nocera of the New York Times suggests, quite similarly, that the protests became masses of diluted voices, agreeing not with intensity on one issue but broadly, vaguely in a spirit of general liberality.

Katie Daubs agrees in an article in the Toronto Star that the movement would have benefitted from ambassadors and official core messages and statements to “sell” – one point of focus for its followers and watchers to fix their eyes on. Further on, Human Events’s John Hayward  claims that the movement had “nothing new to offer” – collecting and making all the usual laments on the government and American society’s failings, not identifying a problem and demanding a solution, and grew meaningless – appeared as pointless “whining”, as often criticized.

Leif Dautch of U.S.A. Today concedes this as the fairest of criticism for the movement as well. However, by his interpretation, the Occupiers are not the ones missing the point of the movement: according to Dautch, “The unifying principle of the movement is not based on political or economic theory, but instead on a quintessentially moral theme” – the best spirit for a protest to take, as after all, “economics is premised on the assumption that people will act solely in their best interest. Morality is one of the few remaining realms in which individuals are occasionally expected to act for another's benefit.”

The point of the Occupy movement, then, is not in voices reaching through the walls of governing offices – it is in provocation of thought in the people, the potential for inspiration. And here, it has certainly left some impression. Returning closer to home from Occupy-inspired anti-inequality movements in Canada, Russia, Australia, and Spain, among others, the protests have sparked the founding of several charities and citizen-run programs and foundations. Journalist Ruth MacLean describes the Rolling Jubilee, an online fundraiser for cancellation of medical debt.

The question remains, however, of whether those marks made are ones that are meant to last. As the title of Daubs’s article asks it, “The Occupy Movement Gets People Asking Questions. But Are They The Right Ones?” If they are, will those answers stick? The Rolling Jubilee is holding firm – “Got $10 to spare? We’ll liberate someone from $200 of debt,” their website swears; though since their launch in November of 2012 they’ve only raised under $600,000 (less than half of the funds raised in under a week for an upcoming indie video game based on popular web comic Homestuck) – but they boast that that money has gone to bail out over $11,000,000 of debt, and its sibling program in affiliation, intent, and origin in the spirit of Occupy called Strike Debt makes active many-times-daily use of the usual handfuls of social media feeds. But if what Strike Debt and Rolling Jubilee have managed are victories, are those victories shared with Occupy as a whole – were those approximately $600,000 worth of donors sympathizers of the plight of the 99% dredged in household debt for transactions America’s spoiled could have paid with a flap of the wrist, or simply willing to lend a small hand to people having trouble paying a few necessary expenses?

It’s also uncertain whether or not the controversies that the movement has brought into vogue are indeed proof of its effectiveness. As long as wealth is gathered and hoarded in the lofts at the topmost levels of the socioeconomic infrastructure, all people but those luckiest enough to live there will be discontented, and were before the movement started to arhythmically stomp its feet – and that the movement’s core message was a moral one, wouldn’t it have nonetheless benefitted from communication by a conducted unison of voices instead of obscurity in a once merely socialistic (another message for America to receive – “socialism” is, in and of itself, hardly the black-speech unthinkable heresy it’s treated as) turned socialistic, anarchic, etc. and often self-contradictory babble? Meanwhile, America is in a period of recession – economics and economic policy are always a topic of discussion, as is tax policy and the trouble of the wealth gap. Income tax rates may indeed be slightly more specific than will occur to the average citizen to ponder on, and the statistics dredged up and theories posed in regards to the current rates and possible effects of alternative ones are likely useful – but are their detailed examination a thing that Occupy should be credited for?

Occupy’s heyday noise echoes, indeed, its own and that of its responses. When I listen in on them, they come more and more to sound lamentingly like the Placebo lyrics: “The call to arms was never true!” I read (albeit anachronistically) across the worldwide Occupy timeline at a year’s worth of protests – beginning with the gala start and rallying cries of “We are the 99%!” in New York with reports of demonstrations in Asia popping up even this year. Most coverage, however, turns up on protests alone, reports on their aftermath fewer and further between except to question where it ought to be looked for. It has moved and moved as a call for everymen and women to come up to the podium and raise their hands to make long-unsatisfied demands of the socioeconomic system. Occupy Oakland’s demonstration is reported to have made a community of its protestors, living a minimalistic but happily Rousseau-esque period of sharing, providing, and all that people begin to forget to value after second grade. But as the movements have grown to too great a size to hold their cohesive shape, people have shouted and people have thought – but they have forgotten how to act. People want help and to help others, yet they cling to their hard-earned 99-percent-er’s money that charities would accept or that could be waved like a flag to attract like-minded friends to open up an informal community campsite or dinner hall. They know that the issue that inspired the Occupy movement is a moral one to begin with, deep down, but that morality roots far too many points of discontent, and when they step forward to offer themselves for the militia and the plans of attack get lost with the messenger, they are too afraid to fight. Occupy has brought people together, surely – but it takes not only being together but thinking together to bring about change.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited

Barr, Meghan. “1 year on, Occupy is in disarray; spirit lives on.” Sept. 17, 2012. Northwest Herald. Web.

Nocera, Joe.

Daubs, Katie. “(???)”

Hayward, John.

Dautch, Leif. “Occupy about morality, not economics.” Nov. 13, 2011. U.S.A. Today. Web.

The Rolling Jubilee. http://rollingjubilee.org/

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